Yesterday we had our final critique session's for our 'Proverbally Yours' Part 2 brief. We were each put into pairs and had to define 5 crit questions that would be the basis of our analysis of other peoples work. I was paired with Andrea and we critiqued to other peoples work whilst other people critiqued my own work. Overall I gained very positive crit feedback, one group made me aware of spelling mistake on my mailing list, which is only a minor detail easily altered, whilst another group suggested that I had made the best of a link between my proverb 'out of sight, out of mind' and my 'fisherman' profession, however the create a better link between the two I could incorporate a deep blue tone into my original 3 poster designs. With the feedback from my earlier poster crit to change the composition make the series of images create a whole face I have now redesigned my original posters taking on advice from two different critique sessions. Overall I am pleased with the outcome of both Proverbally Yours briefs. However, as further development for my 'fisherman' I will create a 'belly band' to prevent any flyers being lost in the post ( another factor suggested by one of the crit groups). Overall I gained positive feedback from all who critiqed my work.
Here are copies of the critique sheets filled out with reflection of my work;
